Alma Hyral - Revision history

BrittanyPanthas at 15:36, 18 February 2014

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BrittanyPanthas at 15:18, 18 February 2014

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BrittanyPanthas: /* On Friendly Terms */

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‎On Friendly Terms

BrittanyPanthas at 08:33, 17 August 2013

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BrittanyPanthas: /* People I Barely Know */

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‎People I Barely Know

BrittanyPanthas: /* Family */

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‎Family

BrittanyPanthas: /* On Friendly Terms */

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‎On Friendly Terms

BrittanyPanthas: /* People I Barely Know */

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‎People I Barely Know

BrittanyPanthas at 08:17, 14 August 2013

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BrittanyPanthas: /* Profile */

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‎Profile

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 ||[[Annia Leradine]]|| Right.. it's our secret.
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-||[[Riku]]|| The lonely times of staring intently into the darkness have already come to an end.  When I take these memories with me on my journey, a new tomorrow will begin for me.
+||[[Riku]]|| The lonely times of staring intently into the darkness have already come to an end.  When I take these memories with me on my journey, a new tomorrow will begin.
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 ||[[Sora]]|| An incredibly nice guy and an unlikely hero.  I hope that I'll be able to help you restore Destiny Island.
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 |[[Ivo Galvan]]|| Seriously?  Are you really such a lecher that you'd take advantage of an innocent amnesiac?
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-|[[Alberic Lux]]|| Recent developments are causing me to reassess how I feel about you.  You're still a jerk.
+|[[Alberic Lux]]|| Recent developments are causing me to reassess how I feel about you.  You're still a horror.
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 ||The Seeker|| What I fear most about you is not your incomprehensible power, but the fact that despite that power you're unknown to the world at large.

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 |group=Alexander Academy, Archadian Empire
 |occupation=White Mage
-|themesong=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S3aRYPSCqdo
+|themesong=http://www.listenonrepeat.com/watch/?v=qs-kzi6W6B0
 |quote=Its your words that gave me courage. They became my light to guide me towards the right path.
 |footer=Dealing with the consequences of a rash decision.
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 '''Astrophile:''' Alma can be seen obsessively gazing into a telescope and recording her findings during most nights.
 '''Disadvantage - Frail:''' Alma is frail and was generally considered sickly as a child.  She falls ill easily, but is able to mitigate this somewhat with her mastery of White Magic.
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 ||[[Thirza Ingersleben]]||She's always kind to me and supportive but she seems to have a low opinion of herself.  I hope I can help her get through that..  She's a better person than she knows.
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-|[[Legion|The Network]]||You're not a science experiment, no matter what she says. Let's stop her legacy together.
+|[[Legion|The Network]]||You're not a science experiment, no matter what she says.
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 ||[[Annia Leradine]]|| Right.. it's our secret.
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-||[[Riku]]|| There are no words to express how I feel about you.  Just as there are no words to express how sorry I am...
+||[[Riku]]|| The lonely times of staring intently into the darkness have already come to an end.  When I take these memories with me on my journey, a new tomorrow will begin for me.
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 ||[[Sora]]|| An incredibly nice guy and an unlikely hero.  I hope that I'll be able to help you restore Destiny Island.
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-||[[Kyra Hyral]]||No matter how much I exasperate you, know that you are and always have been my hero, Kyra.  Maybe one day I'll be the sister you deserve.
+||[[Kyra Hyral]]|| Maybe one day I'll be the sister you deserve.  Until then, I'll stay out of your way.
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-||Tira Hyral||Even though you're gone, I live my life in your memory Tira.  What I do next, I do for you.
+||Tira Hyral|| Only fond memories Tira.  Maybe some day we'll be able to add to them without guilt.
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-||Father Hyral|| I wish I could say that I'm making you proud..  but I'm a terrible daughter.  I'm so sorry, daddy, but the life you laid out for me is no longer the one I want to lead.
+||Father Hyral|| While I'd like to see you again some day, daddy, the life you laid out for me is no longer the one I want to lead.
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 ||Anastasia Hyral|| There are so many things I wish I could have told you Mom.  But I didn't have the courage, and the opportunity is gone.
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-||Ramza Hyral|| I resent that you told Mom and Dad.. but I still love you.  I'll find a way to save you, I promise.
+||Ramza Hyral|| Resentment fades over time.  Now I just hope I'll be able to see you again some day.
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-||Rest of the Family|| I will save you all, or die in the attempt.
+||Rest of the Family|| Could you have survived this long?  Maybe not.  It's still worth the attempt.
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-|[[Helena Celba]]|| I'm rather certain I know what you are now.  I still don't hate you, nor will I try to change you.  I just hope you find your way.
+|[[Helena Celba]]|| Well, the past is the past.  Resentment tends to fade over time.
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-|[[Akari Seran]]|| No matter how relentlessly you bullied me... I went too far.  Another failure of control on my part.
+|[[Akari Seran]]|| I hope you're a better friend to Aeschere than I think you are.
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-|[[Garland]]|| .....  *Retches at the mere thought of him*
+|[[Garland]]|| Chaos personified.
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 ||Feige Abramson|| I pity you, more than anything.  If you are dead, then I pray that Yahweh has mercy on your soul.  I doubt that Chaos will.
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 |[[Ivo Galvan]]|| Seriously?  Are you really such a lecher that you'd take advantage of an innocent amnesiac?
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-|[[Alberic Lux]]|| You are a horror.
+|[[Alberic Lux]]|| Recent developments are causing me to reassess how I feel about you.  You're still a jerk.
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 ||The Seeker|| What I fear most about you is not your incomprehensible power, but the fact that despite that power you're unknown to the world at large.
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-||Lord Ombra|| While you were pure evil.... I lost control.  I shouldn't have jumped to...
+||Lord Ombra|| The past is the past and I can't fret over it any longer.
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-||Five|| What have I done?  I'm no better than....  it shouldn't have been that easy for me to make that decision.
+||Five|| Farewell.
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-||[[Soan Sagittarius|DRAGOON MAN!]]||A hero! I'm glad he survived the fall of our world.  We need heroes like him. He has to be someone I know!  I'll find out who he is!
+||[[Soan Sagittarius|DRAGOON MAN!]]||A hero!
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 ||[[Leon]]|| I hope you see her again one day.
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-||[[Minette Odam]]||I'm so sorry for what happened.  I know sometimes you may be self-absorbed, but you didn't deserve that.  Bravery like yours should be rewarded, not punished.
+||[[Minette Odam]]||Kind of funny sometimes, but I admit, I feel pretty badly for her.  I was a social reject in a different way and still am in a lot of ways.
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 ||[[Raine Arland]]||Well he likes my cooking..  I don't really know much else about him though.  He seems kind of reckless.
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 ||[[Ulharisk]]|| Sorry that I freaked out.  The dragon thing is pretty cool..  really!
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-||[[Faruja Senra]]|| Do you hate me, for believing in the Creatrix, rather than your Faram and Saint Ajora?
+||[[Faruja Senra]]|| Take it from me, religious zealotry can blind anyone.
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 ||[[Argider]]|| Did you really kill a child!?
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-||[[Caran Steel]]|| Well uh..  I love your cat!  Ketan is amazing!
+||[[Caran Steel]]|| You have a lovely cat.
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 ||[[Gabranth]]|| He's rather serious but.. sometimes hints of kindness shine through.  Best not to tempt him, as I'm told he's a master of the Force Choke!
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 =Alternate Main Themes=
 '''Truth''': http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dE1eCoj2D1s

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 ||[[Morrighan Alazne|Kara]]|| Is the past better left buried?  Maybe, but that's your choice to make.  Whatever your choice, I'll help you any way I can.
 |}

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	And then her time in the World of Ruin began...		And then her time in the World of Ruin began...
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	=Abilities=		=Abilities=

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 ||[[Haneisuru]]|| I'm not really into the 'pain' thing.  But to each their own.  Mimic powers sound pretty cool, just haven't witnessed you using them yet.
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 ||[[Rena Laradyne]]||Sometimes I wonder if what I see of you is the real you.  And other times I wonder if I truly desire to see the true Rena Laradyne.  Either way, I remain your friend.
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-||[[Will Sherman]]||What do those eyes of yours truly see, when they look at the world?
+||[[Will Sherman]]||What do those eyes of yours truly see, when they look at the world?  I'm glad Riku has a friend like you.
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 ||[[Maximilien]]|| A rather intense individual.  I promise that I'll keep your secrets.
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 ||[[Sora]]|| An incredibly nice guy and an unlikely hero.  I hope that I'll be able to help you restore Destiny Island.
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-||[[Faris Scherwiz|Sarisa Tycoon]]|| There are no true royalty on Galianda, so meeting her was a real experience.  She's so down to earth for a Princess.  Sweatdrop, maybe too down to earth.
+||[[Faris Scherwiz|Sarisa Tycoon]]|| There are no true royalty on Galianda, so meeting her was a real experience.  She's so down to earth for a Princess.  *Sweatdrop* Maybe too down to earth.
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 ||[[Karth Mason]]|| An amazing warrior, and a truly kind individual who cares for his family.  I hope that he's able to cure his mother of her affliction.

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 ||[[Raine Arland]]||Well he likes my cooking..  I don't really know much else about him though.  He seems kind of reckless.
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-||[[Maira]]|| I heard that someone's stomach was the key to their heart, but it's sort of ridiculous with her!  She's very nice though.  Why does Garland pursue you?
+||[[Maira]]|| I heard that someone's stomach was the key to their heart, but it's sort of ridiculous with her!  She's very nice though.
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 ||[[Margaux Fleury]]|| She's so elegant and exotic..  compared to me, maybe she'll take up my offer for her to go to Seloria.
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-||[[Avira]]|| Why does Garland have such an interest in you?
+||[[Avira]]|| The leader of VALKYRI, a strong warrior and nice person overall.  I just wish Garland didn't keep harassing her.
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 ||[[Ulharisk]]|| Sorry that I freaked out.  The dragon thing is pretty cool..  really!

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 ||[[Rapunzel]]|| And Mom once told me she thought I was growing my hair out too long!  Wields a mean frying pan both inside and outside of the kitchen. Pascal is adorable.
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-||[[Aeschere Childs]]|| Seems like a reasonably well-balanced individual, and she's pretty friendly.  Which makes me wonder why she hangs with Akari Seran.
+||[[Aeschere Childs]]|| Seems like a reasonably well-balanced individual, and she's pretty friendly.  Which makes me wonder why she hangs out with Akari Seran.
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 ||[[Jidro Gerrison]]|| I hope you and Annia find happiness together.  You're certainly not what my Father led me to believe.
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 ||[[Myla Mason]]|| Skilled engineer and heir to a pirate legacy.  Could it get any better than that?
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 |[[Illua]]|| ...jerky serial villain straight out of a Ramuha spy vid.
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 |[[Alberic Lux]]|| You are a horror.
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-|The Seeker|| What I fear most about you is not your incomprehensible power, but the fact that despite that power you're unknown to the world at large.
+||The Seeker|| What I fear most about you is not your incomprehensible power, but the fact that despite that power you're unknown to the world at large.
 |}
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-|Lord Ombra|| While you were pure evil.... I lost control.  I shouldn't have jumped to...
+||Lord Ombra|| While you were pure evil.... I lost control.  I shouldn't have jumped to...
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-|Five|| What have I done?  I'm no better than....  it shouldn't have been that easy for me to make that decision.
+||Five|| What have I done?  I'm no better than....  it shouldn't have been that easy for me to make that decision.
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	=Profile=		=Profile=

−	Born on Ramuha, Alma is the youngest daughter of the prominent Hyral family, a name well known amongst the highest levels of the Cosma Naturalis faith. Alma is believed to remain a devout adherent to the doctrine of the Cosma Naturalis Church. She has a reputation for being ultraconservative and frumpy, and she was something of a meek pariah amongst those who knew her at Alexander Academy. It is rumored that her white magic takes a rather unique form, as related to her field of study. At a superficial glance, she's something of a klutz, and a nerd who ~~studies the subjects of~~ astronomy over the harder sciences. She was also known to be a magnet for bullying, and its rumored she was even withdrawn from the Academy early to protect her from that, which doesnt help her case. After a short bout of employment with the Murasame Zaibatsu which resulted in her resignation, she's begun her tenure in the Archadian Empire. As of late its said that she's started to come out of her shell...	+	Born on Ramuha, Alma is the youngest daughter of the prominent Hyral family, a name well known amongst the highest levels of the Cosma Naturalis faith. Alma is believed to remain a devout adherent to the doctrine of the Cosma Naturalis Church. She has a reputation for being ultraconservative and frumpy, and she was something of a meek pariah amongst those who knew her at Alexander Academy. It is rumored that her white magic takes a rather unique form, as related to her field of study. At a superficial glance, she's something of a klutz, and a nerd who focuses on studying astronomy over the harder sciences. She was also known to be a magnet for bullying, and its rumored she was even withdrawn from the Academy early to protect her from that, which doesnt help her case. After a short bout of employment with the Murasame Zaibatsu which resulted in her resignation, she's begun her tenure in the Archadian Empire. As of late its said that she's started to come out of her shell...