Avira - Revision history

RyuuAya: /* Acquaintances */

2013-12-07T00:45:40Z

‎Acquaintances

RyuuAya: /* Relationships */

2013-06-16T21:02:59Z

‎Relationships

RyuuAya: /* The Story Thus Far */

2013-05-13T01:45:05Z

‎The Story Thus Far

RyuuAya: /* Random Facts */

2013-05-05T17:00:13Z

‎Random Facts

RyuuAya: /* The Buildup */

2013-05-05T16:58:28Z

‎The Buildup

RyuuAya at 16:57, 5 May 2013

2013-05-05T16:57:20Z

RyuuAya: /* The Manhattan Project */

2013-05-05T16:49:37Z

‎The Manhattan Project

RyuuAya: /* The Maid Incident */

2013-05-05T16:48:15Z

‎The Maid Incident

RyuuAya: /* The Story Thus Far */

2013-05-05T16:46:04Z

‎The Story Thus Far

RyuuAya: Now here is the story all about how my life got flip turned upside down. I'd like to take a minute, just sit right there...

2013-05-05T16:37:03Z

Now here is the story all about how my life got flip turned upside down. I'd like to take a minute, just sit right there...

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 |[[Argider]]||Affection||"A charming sky pirate that has offered VALKYRI his services. What isn't there to love?"
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 |Valeth Wodanaz||Disappointment||"The sooner I forget you, the better. [[Upon the Meadows of Past|I did not need that reminder...]]"

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 |<b>Allies</b>
-|Clan Dagda, [[Mercade Alexander]], [[Maira]], [[Vespa]], [[Minerva]],[[Skoll Ulfang]], [[Valencia]], [[Katyna]], [[Angantyr Vespar]], [[Jasmine]], [[King Mickey]], [[TRON]], [[The Network]], [[Percival]]
+|Clan Dagda, [[Mercade Alexander]], [[Maira]], [[Vespa]], [[Minerva]],[[Skoll Ulfang]], [[Katyna]], [[Angantyr Vespar]], [[Jasmine]], [[King Mickey]], [[TRON]], [[The Network]], [[Percival]]
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 |<b>Adversaries</b>
-|[[Ivo Galvan]], [[Kaze]], [[LEXUS]], [[Sho Minamimoto]], [[Hati]], [[Morrighan Alazne‎]], [[Baigan]], [[Kaydin]], [[Garland]], [[Riku]], [[Loki]], [[Dr. Anton Sevarius]], [[Makenshi]], [[Gabranth]], [[Hades]], [[Seith]], [[Royce]]
+|[[Ivo Galvan]], [[Kaze]], [[LEXUS]], [[Sho Minamimoto]], [[Hati]], [[Morrighan Alazne‎]], [[Baigan]], [[Kaydin]], [[Garland]], [[Riku]], [[Loki]], [[Dr. Anton Sevarius]], [[Makenshi]], [[Gabranth]], [[Hades]], [[Seith]], [[Royce]], [[Dark Knight]], [[Ophelia]]
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 |<b>Acquaintances</b>
-|[[Pixi]], [[Sora]], [[Sarafina Carenze]], [[Lily]], [[Gilgamesh]], [[Reize Seatlan]], [[Faruja Senra]], [[Shiki Misaki]], [[Will Sherman]], [[Maximilien Amadeus Renaud-Sylvianne]], [[Riku|Sable]], [[Raiya Fujihara]], [[Isaac Hanlon]], [[CHIEF]], [[Margaux Fleury]], [[Lavi]], Valeth Wodanaz
+|[[Valencia]], [[Sora]], [[Sarafina Carenze]], [[Lily]], [[Gilgamesh]], [[Reize Seatlan]], [[Faruja Senra]], [[Shiki Misaki]], [[Will Sherman]], [[Maximilien Amadeus Renaud-Sylvianne]], [[Riku|Sable]], [[Raiya Fujihara]], [[Isaac Hanlon]], [[CHIEF]], [[Margaux Fleury]], [[Lavi]], [[Argider]], Valeth Wodanaz
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 |}
-===Allies===
+===Allies and Friends===
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 |[[Mercade Alexander]]||Affection||"You are the light my life needs right now."
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-|[[Maira]]||BFF-ness||"My best friend and first friend. We'll take on the darkness together!"
+|[[Maira]]||BFF-ness||"You've been through a whole lot of crap lately. I'm so worried about you."
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-|[[Vespa]]||Friendship||"How interesting! The maid outfit is not a curse. I'm happy to have her hear."
+|[[Vespa]]||Friendship||"How interesting! The maid outfit is not a curse. I'm happy to have her here."
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 |[[Minerva]]||Friendship||"She's pretty awesome. I'm glad to have her on board! You've been awful quiet lately...I wonder if something is wrong."
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 |[[Skoll Ulfang]]||Friendship||"I'm happy we were able to move forward...but I am sad that I am not your Golden Wolf. I hope you find her one day."
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 |[[Katyna]]||????||"...who knows what the future holds. I hope she can climb to the path of light."
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-|[[Angantyr Vespar]]||Wary Friendship||"W..well I'm glad we've made up, though the Garland thing is going to continue to be a problem, I see. But...I forgive you, for what may come, Angantyr."
+|[[Angantyr Vespar]]||Wary Friendship?||"Seems like two steps forward and one step back. What the hell just happened with Maira?!"
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 |[[Jasmine]]||Awe||"So this is what it's like to be in her position. Except I'm nothing like her. My heart was not that pure."
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 |[[The Network]]||Friendship||"They're adorable and friendly. I'm glad they're in a better place with the TDA. I kind of wish Shida would join VALKYRI though, I get the feeling she'd be perfect in it."
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-|[[Percival]]||Friendship||"Poor guy, he's so hard on himself lately. I know what he did but he severely underestimates his own kindness."
+|[[Percival]]||Friendship||"The self-flagellation is getting really tiresome!"
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 ! scope="col" width="500" | Thoughts
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-|[[Ivo Galvan]]||Hmph||"Still a jerk. Still jerking around poor Maira."
+|[[Ivo Galvan]]||Hmph||"Scoundrel!"
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 |[[Kaze]]||Sheer Unbridled Terror|| "...I'd rather have him fight the White Cloud instead of me. I'm unsure he can actually destroy a world at this point. Says his own world was destroyed."
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 |[[Kaydin]]||Wariness||"Now I know where your loyalties lie. I'll think twice about trusting you in the future. I also want a rematch."
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-|[[Garland]]||Fear||"Angantyr's mentor. That this man has elected to attack me at any time for the purposes of training. Now he is punishing me for helping Morrighan. He wants me to walk his path to strength."
+|[[Garland]]||Fear||"At first I thought he was just testing me. Now I just thinks he wants me devoured by the darkness. This game is no longer fun."
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 |[[Riku]]||Friendship||"Maybe he is sorry. He certainly isn't helping the Shadow Lords and he definitely didn't...lecture me for what I've done. It looks like he's doing a lot better and has found a place in Archadia. I feel...happy for him."
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 |[[Royce]]||Fear||"This woman is terrifying. I wish I never looked into that eye of hers."
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-|[[Dark Knight]]||Anger||"I will not let you corrupt Maira. Furthermore, you are a man, I made you bleed, you are not darkness."
+|[[Dark Knight]]||Anger||"A dog always returns to his master."
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 ! scope="col" width="500" | Thoughts
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-|[[Pixi]]||Awe||"Mouthing off to the Archadian guards like that...that viera is cra-zy."
+|[[Valencia]]||Curiosity||"Magical science, eh? Now that sounds interesting."
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 |[[Sora]]||Awe||"He's nice. Without him, we would have never restored Manhattan."
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 |[[Lavi]]||Regret||"Looks like my respect to her was one sided."
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 |Valeth Wodanaz||Disappointment||"The sooner I forget you, the better. [[Upon the Meadows of Past|I did not need that reminder...]]"

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 = The Story Thus Far =
-Warning, large amounts of text ahead.
+Warning, large amounts of text ahead of Avira's on-MUSH history. Arcs to be added as they happen.
 ==Brave New World==
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 While encountering many wild and dangerous Heartless wherever she traveled, Avira took notice of other women similar in goal to her-none standing out more than the fire mage [[Maira]]. She and Maira became fast friends and, along with the axe-wielding battle maid [[Vespa]], formed the mercenary group [[VALKYRI]].  Though one of their prime directives was to travel a lot, they established a guild hall in Traverse Town to serve as a base of operations and temporary place to stay.
 ==The Maid Incident==
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 Fortunately, their team won! Quite curiously, Hades handed over the Wind Shard with little issue-well, except for having the winning team [[To the Victor...|sign a marketing contract]].
-More to be added later.
+The shards were collected-but not all of them, as Merlin revealed that there was a final shard called the Spirit Shard that had to be collected. Based on [[The Final Shard|guidance from Mama Odie]], it seemed that the spirit shard was most likely contained inside a person. Turns out that person was the Dusk Princess of Manhattan. Unfortunately, [[The Real Xanatos Gambit|Hades knew]] that person was Avira. Hades revealed this and the contract she had made with him in front of everyone working to restore the world, forcing Avira back into her mutate form. Ashamed, she promptly fled.
 == Samsara of Battle ==
-Here's where all the stuff about increased Garland aggressions will be written up. Laters.
+Through Angantyr, Avira was unfortunate enough to catch the attention of his mentor, [[Garland]]. Recognizing Avira's desire to grow stronger and push beyond her limits, he decided to [[A Delightful Chat|take her as a "student."]]. This, unfortunately, amounted to not only being spied on constantly by Garland and his minions but included the stipulation that the embodiment of Chaos could [[The Garland Games|attack her]] at any place or [[Complaints Department|any time]].
 = Combat Skills =

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 = Random Facts =
 - Avira's birthday is on the 14th of March, making her a Pisces.
-- Avira is of mixed ethnicity. Her mother was hispanic while her father was the first American-born child of two Russian Jewish immigrants.
 = Logs =

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 Warning, large amounts of text ahead.
-==The Buildup==
+==Brave New World==
 There is nothing really worth noting about Rosalie Levine before Earth was destroyed. She hailed from Brooklyn and was the assistant of a chiropractor.
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 While encountering many wild and dangerous Heartless wherever she traveled, Avira took notice of other women similar in goal to her-none standing out more than the fire mage [[Maira]]. She and Maira became fast friends and, along with the axe-wielding battle maid [[Vespa]], formed the mercenary group [[VALKYRI]].  Though one of their prime directives was to travel a lot, they established a guild hall in Traverse Town to serve as a base of operations and temporary place to stay.
 Through Angantyr, Avira was unfortunate enough to catch the attention of his mentor, [[Garland]]. Recognizing Avira's desire to grow stronger and push beyond her limits, he decided to [[A Delightful Chat|take her as a "student."]]. This, unfortunately, amounted to not only being spied on constantly by Garland and his minions but included the stipulation that the embodiment of Chaos could [[The Garland Games|attack her]] at any place or [[Complaints Department|any time]].
 ==The Maid Incident==

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 |styles=Hunter
 |hometown=Brooklyn
-|alignment=Wandering Force
+|alignment=Forces of Restoration
 |group=VALKYRI, Twilight Detective Agency
 |occupation=VALKYRI Leader
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 = Random Facts =
 - Avira's birthday is on the 14th of March, making her a Pisces.
 = Logs =

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 Her mutated form attracted quite a bit of unwanted attention, from a [[An Offer Refused|Gaudium Lord]] trying to forcefully recruit her to the Shadow Lord Ember trying to get her to fall to her darkness by [[Kidnapped!|kidnapping Maira.]]
-After [[For the Cure|retrieving the cure|]] from Garland, Avira brought it to Merlin for duplication, incurring the debt of a favor to be repaid later in the process. [[Cure for the Mutated|The cure]], while it removed the extra darkness infesting Avira and Angantyr, it did not appear to undo the animal mutations caused by Sevarius's serum in Avira.
+After [[For the Cure|retrieving the cure]] from Garland, Avira brought it to Merlin for duplication, incurring the debt of a favor to be repaid later in the process. [[Cure for the Mutated|The cure]], while it removed the extra darkness infesting Avira and Angantyr, it did not appear to undo the animal mutations caused by Sevarius's serum in Avira.
 Though she held on to the hope that the mutations were just slow to fade, eventually she became distraught that they wouldn't and that the three potential loves in her life-Mercade, Skoll, and Angantyr, wouldn't love her if she looked like a monster. She never really considered that they would accept her that way. Sensing her despair, [[Hades]] appeared and offered her [[Let's Make A Deal|a deal]], restoring her human form in exchange for working for him in her mutate form when needed. There was even an escape clause built in to this contract: Avira would become permanently human if she received true love's kiss while a mutate. Foolishly, she accepted.

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 ==The Maid Incident==
-Set in motion by the constant fleeing of the Princess of Heart [[Jasmine]], who took refuge in [[Raid on Balamb Garden|Balamb Garden]], Avira's encounter with [[Morrighan Alazne]] could have amounted to any encounter on a battlefield. Morrighan was a white mage assisting Baigan at the time, so naturally Avira employed the most reliable strategy for disrupting healing support: punching the mage in the face.
+Set in motion by the constant fleeing of the Princess of Heart [[Jasmine]], who [[Raid on Balamb Garden|took refuge in Balamb Garden]], Avira's encounter with [[Morrighan Alazne]] could have amounted to any encounter on a battlefield. Morrighan was a white mage assisting Baigan at the time, so naturally Avira employed the most reliable strategy for disrupting healing support: punching the mage in the face.
 Unfortunately, Morrighan Alazne was the type to hold a grudge.

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 = The Story Thus Far =
 ==The Buildup==
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 Believing that Earth had been destroyed, she adopted a new name-Avira-and vowed to remake herself into a somebody. She swore fealty to the clan and sought the help of their mercenary ally, [[Angantyr Vespar]], eager to learn how to fight and hunt.
-However it wasn't long before Avira ventured out into the shattered worlds, looking for answers like so many others about the Heartless plague. Through her wanderings she discovered that a piece of her true world did still exist in the form of the Island of Manhattan. She met other survivors, such as [[Mercade Alexander]], but elected to conceal her origins. Eventually, she would ally herself with the [[Twilight Detective Agency]]. Of course, against a detective as sharp as him, he [[To Escape the Past|eventually noticed]] that several of her mannerisms were out of place for someone puportedly from Ivalice!
+However it wasn't long before Avira ventured out into the shattered worlds, looking for answers like so many others about the Heartless plague. Through her wanderings she discovered that a piece of her true world did still exist in the form of the Island of Manhattan. She met other survivors, such as [[Mercade Alexander]], but elected to conceal her origins. Eventually, she would ally herself with the [[Twilight Detective Agency]]. Of course, against a detective as sharp as him, he [[To Escape The Past|eventually noticed]] that several of her mannerisms were out of place for someone purportedly from Ivalice!
-In her travels she also met a werewolf named [[Skoll Ulfang]]. Having seen he was a proficient fighter and hunter, she wheedled him into taking her as a student. Unknown to her, Skoll was a pawn of the Gaudium Lords, his memories manipulated into thinking that the [[Kaze|Red-haired man]] had destroyed his world. This lead to an [[Kaze! Misunderstanding the Red-Haired Ma|unfortunate incident]] where Avira confronted the Red-haired man alone and was nearly killed in the process due to his overwhelming power. A distraught Skoll subjected her to more intense training in result, [[A Hasty Trip|abandoning her]] in a wolf-filled forest. This training exercise was [[Burgers and Pi|complicated further]] by the Reaper [[Sho Minamimoto]], who placed dangerous Taboo Noise in the forest. In the process, Avira discovered the power of the Beastmaster Voice but was ultimately rescued when Skoll posted a note asking for the help of "Players."
+In her travels she also met a werewolf named [[Skoll Ulfang]]. Having seen he was a proficient fighter and hunter, she wheedled him into taking her as a student. Unknown to her, Skoll was a pawn of the Gaudium Lords, his memories manipulated into thinking that the [[Kaze|Red-haired man]] had destroyed his world. This lead to an [[Kaze! Misunderstanding the Red-Haired Ma|unfortunate incident]] where Avira confronted the Red-haired man alone and was nearly killed in the process due to his overwhelming power. A distraught Skoll subjected her to more intense training in result, [[A Hasty Trip|abandoning her]] in a wolf-filled forest. This training exercise was [[Burgers And Pi|complicated further]] by the Reaper [[Sho Minamimoto]], who placed dangerous Taboo Noise in the forest. In the process, Avira discovered the power of the Beastmaster Voice but was ultimately rescued when Skoll posted a note asking for the help of "Players."
-While encountering many wild and dangerous Heartless wherever she travelled, Avira took notice of other women similar in goal to her-none standing out more than the fire mage [[Maira]]. She and Maira became fast friends and, along with the axe-wielding battle maid [[Vespa]], formed the mercenary group [[VALKYRI]].  Though one of their prime directives was to travel a lot, they established a guild hall in Traverse Town to serve as a base of operations and temporary place to stay.
+While encountering many wild and dangerous Heartless wherever she traveled, Avira took notice of other women similar in goal to her-none standing out more than the fire mage [[Maira]]. She and Maira became fast friends and, along with the axe-wielding battle maid [[Vespa]], formed the mercenary group [[VALKYRI]].  Though one of their prime directives was to travel a lot, they established a guild hall in Traverse Town to serve as a base of operations and temporary place to stay.
-Through Angantyr, Avira was unfortunate enough to catch the attention of his mentor, [[Garland]]. Recognizing Avira's desire to grow stronger and push beyond her limits, he decided to [[A Delightful Chat|take her as a "student."]]. This, unfortunately, amounted to not only being spied on constantly by Garland and his minions but included the stipulation that the embodiment of Chaos could [[The Garland Games|attack her]] at any place or any time.
+Through Angantyr, Avira was unfortunate enough to catch the attention of his mentor, [[Garland]]. Recognizing Avira's desire to grow stronger and push beyond her limits, he decided to [[A Delightful Chat|take her as a "student."]]. This, unfortunately, amounted to not only being spied on constantly by Garland and his minions but included the stipulation that the embodiment of Chaos could [[The Garland Games|attack her]] at any place or [[Complaints Department|any time]].
 ==The Maid Incident==
-Set in motion by the constant fleeing of the Princess of Heart [[Jasmine]], who took refuge in [[Raid on Balamb Garden|Balamb Garden]], Avira's encounter with [[Morrighan Alanze]] could have amounted to any encounter on a battlefield. Morrighan was a white mage assisting Baigan at the time, so naturally Avira employed the most reliable strategy for disrupting healing support: punching the mage in the face.
+Set in motion by the constant fleeing of the Princess of Heart [[Jasmine]], who took refuge in [[Raid on Balamb Garden|Balamb Garden]], Avira's encounter with [[Morrighan Alazne]] could have amounted to any encounter on a battlefield. Morrighan was a white mage assisting Baigan at the time, so naturally Avira employed the most reliable strategy for disrupting healing support: punching the mage in the face.
-Unfortunately, Morrighan Alanze was the type to hold a grudge.
+Unfortunately, Morrighan Alazne was the type to hold a grudge.
 Some time later, she ordered then Baron-allied dark knight [[Kaydin]] to arrest Avira and bring her to Baron. Much to Morrighan's surprise, Kaydin [[Long Arm of the Harpy|actually succeeded]] in apprehending the huntress after a fierce fight in the desert. Avira's abduction had, fortunately, not gone unnoticed.
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 == Samsara of Battle ==
 Here's where all the stuff about increased Garland aggressions will be written up. Laters.
 = Combat Skills =

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 = Skills =
 Got Spine?, World Refugee, Go Big or Go Home, Proud Human, Hidden Mutate, Level 2, Seeking Truth, Oddly Competent With Technology, Scarred, Bringer Of Slurpees, Fake It Until You Make It, Reading a Distressing Amount of Books, Of Two Worlds, No Sleep Till Brooklyn, I Left My Heart In Manhattan, Kickassian Apprentice, Ride of the VALKRYI, Wolf Affinity, Ritz?, Final Kingdom IS My Tragic Past!, Tsundere Love Song, Step 1: Become Awesome, Step 2: Acquire Airship, Step 3: Become Sky Pirate, Step 4: ??????, Step 5: Profit!, Former Dusk Princess?
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