Percival - Revision history

Adampsencik: /* Enemies, Rivals */

2013-05-02T14:35:52Z

‎Enemies, Rivals

Adampsencik: /* Allies, Friends */

2013-05-02T14:33:18Z

‎Allies, Friends

Adampsencik at 03:50, 8 April 2013

2013-04-08T03:50:33Z

Adampsencik: /* Enemies, Rivals */

2013-03-22T22:26:47Z

‎Enemies, Rivals

Adampsencik: /* Enemies, Rivals */

2013-03-22T22:06:51Z

‎Enemies, Rivals

Adampsencik at 00:00, 22 March 2013

2013-03-22T00:00:50Z

Adampsencik: /* Allies, Friends */

2013-03-14T23:04:02Z

‎Allies, Friends

Adampsencik: /* Acquaintances */

2013-03-14T23:00:32Z

‎Acquaintances

Adampsencik: /* Enemies, Rivals */

2013-03-14T22:56:27Z

‎Enemies, Rivals

Adampsencik: /* Allies, Friends */

2013-03-14T22:55:56Z

‎Allies, Friends

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 | [[Demona]] || Confusion || You are the historical founder of my clan, and by your own account, the cause of its near ruin.  Yet I cannot hate you. Please put aside your irrational hatred of humanity before it destroys all of our kind.
 |}

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 | [[Avira]] || Awe ||  Stay safe Lady Avira.  And know that I believe in you, no matter what mistakes you have made.  When this is all over, I hope to hear you sing again.
 |-
-| [[Maira]] || Friend ||  Never doubt that you are a hero, Lady Maira.  Some are fated to be heroes, but you /choose/ to be one.
+| [[Maira]] || Awe ||  There's nothing I wouldn't do for her.
 |-
 |}

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 |weight=~350 pounds.
 |series=Gargoyles
-|styles=Noble Gargoyle
+|styles=Squire-Errant
 |hometown=London, England
 |alignment=Forces of Restoration
 |group=Twilight Detective Agency
-|occupation=Squire-Errant
+|occupation=Detective
 |themesong=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ak8BazMEuvg
 |quote="And so here I am with no sword, no Lord in chivalry, disgraced and broken.  Like my namesake I find myself on a hopeless quest. It is in that quest that I shall find myself."

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 | [[Armored Elf]] || Pity || You call me piteous, but it is you that I feel sympathy for.  Why do you play games with people, truly?  What befell you that made you this way?
 |-
-| [[Demona]] || Confusion || You are the historical founder of my clan, and by your account, the source of its initial ruin.  And yet I cannot hate you. Please put aside your irrational hatred of humanity before it destroys all of our kind.
+| [[Demona]] || Confusion || You are the historical founder of my clan, and by your own account, the cause of its near ruin.  Yet I cannot hate you. Please put aside your irrational hatred of humanity before it destroys all of our kind.
 |}

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 | [[Armored Elf]] || Pity || You call me piteous, but it is you that I feel sympathy for.  Why do you play games with people, truly?  What befell you that made you this way?
 |}

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 |firstname=Percival
 |age=42 years old.
 |species=Gargoyle
 |sex=Male

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 | [[Mulan]] || Respect ||  A fine young man, with a trained pet cricket.  He has helped us on more than one occasion and I would lend him my sword any time.
 |-
 |}

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 | [[Grant Majors]] || Respected Rival || There is some measure of honor in you, but I still don't trust you.  Your challenge to Hercules as the Hydra attacked was most fortuitous.  Thank you for saving my life, you certainly were not obligated to.
 |-
-| [[Percival]] || ..... ||  That day still haunts me.
+| [[Percival]] || My own Worst Enemy ||  That day still haunts me.
 |-
 | [[Armored Elf]] || Pity || You call me piteous, but it is you that I feel sympathy for.  Why do you play games with people, truly?  What befell you that made you this way?

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 ! scope="col"| Thoughts
 |-
-| [[Legion]] || Friend, I think? || Legion is an enigma to me.  I don't understand her, and I know I often frustrate her, but I still think of the hive mind of sisters as my friends.
+| [[Legion]] || Friend || Thank you for being you.
 |-
 | [[Deidra]] || Friend ||  I do not know you very well, but I was lost and you found me wandering in the dark.  I will always be indebted to you.
 |-
-| [[Mercade Alexander]] || Respected Comrade ||  You didn't have to give me a chance, but you did.  Thank you.  I only hope that I am worthy of your trust.
+| [[Mercade Alexander]] || Respected Comrade ||  I trust you.  I know I frustrate you, but my only desire is that you do not make the same mistake I once made.
 |-
-| [[Maximilien]] || Respect || A conniving gentleman thief.  And yet I sense there is more to you than that.  I envy you.
+| [[Maximilien]] || French Rival || I will see your promise fulfilled.
 |-
 | [[Leida]] || So high above me. || The little princess.  While I know the darkness lurks within, I will give my all safeguarding you from it.
 |-
-| [[Zia]] || So high above me. ||  You are a good friend.  Better than I deserve.
+| [[Zia]] || Friendship ||  You are a good friend.  Better than I deserve.
 |-
-| [[Faruja Senra]] || Forgive me. || I'm unworthy of even standing in your presence Ser Senra.  I do not expect your forgiveness for my actions.
+| [[Faruja Senra]] || Respect || We'll see this through to the end.
 |-
-| [[Will Sherman]] || Respect || I know you think me a fool, and it may be deserved.  I will take your advice to heart, and see where the winds take me.
+| [[Will Sherman]] || Respect || I know that you think me a fool, and perhaps I am.  I will take your advice to heart, and see where the winds take me.
 |-
 |}